about the cosplay: great job by all of you who worked on it. No remarks about that.
The picture however.. I really do not like it. There's way to much in there trying to grab the viewers attention. I really don't know where to look first, while the viewers attention should be drawn towards the person posing. Had this been taken with a big aperture (f1.8 or 2.8, not 8.0) so that he would be sharp and the machine in the back out of focus, it would be a completely different image. From what i can make of it, it seems as if you added some kind of ice crystal texture on top of it. More viewer distraction.